tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post115731870153680384..comments2023-09-26T13:59:22.381+03:00Comments on Dostoyevsky in space: another tryUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157472841647266042006-09-05T19:14:00.000+03:002006-09-05T19:14:00.000+03:00I read this blog and it's jolly good !...I read this blog and it's jolly good !...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157408813540012622006-09-05T01:26:00.000+03:002006-09-05T01:26:00.000+03:00I was thinking the same thing when I woke up this ...I was thinking the same thing when I woke up this morning. But you'll have to give me time, man, time! Now that spring's come to Melbourne, everything's gone topsy turvy.jikajikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356454277883869001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157401649050803002006-09-04T23:27:00.000+03:002006-09-04T23:27:00.000+03:00maybe you could write your version of where it sho...maybe you could write your version of where it should go then? give it a try, nobody else reads this blog anyway, so if you dont think it works it would at least give me an idea...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157365494759987972006-09-04T13:24:00.000+03:002006-09-04T13:24:00.000+03:00Whaddya talking about 'hopeless'? You're almost th...Whaddya talking about 'hopeless'? You're almost there, buddy.jikajikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356454277883869001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157358484980535542006-09-04T11:28:00.000+03:002006-09-04T11:28:00.000+03:00hmm...i dont know then man, i dont know....maybe i...hmm...i dont know then man, i dont know....maybe its hopeless....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157342339989060412006-09-04T06:58:00.000+03:002006-09-04T06:58:00.000+03:00No, no, the dialogue wasn't nonsensical. It was pr...No, no, the dialogue wasn't nonsensical. It was preposterous. Whic isn't so bad. But it was definitely whirlygigglish.<BR/><BR/>Ah, whirlygigglism - where would we be without you?jikajikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356454277883869001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16409645.post-1157341303539076862006-09-04T06:41:00.000+03:002006-09-04T06:41:00.000+03:00Yeah buddy, now you're getting closer. 'Cept it ca...Yeah buddy, now you're getting closer. 'Cept it can be a bit painful to read a whirlygigglish and nonsensical stream of dialogue, even if it is relevant to the point of your story, unless it's HIGHLY FUCKING AMUSING. Which it often is. But not always.<BR/><BR/>And this bit:<BR/><BR/>'Nothing begun with its motives in pride can come to anything good, and what were my motives if not my pride, based in my desire to show myself to be superior and better than buddy.'<BR/><BR/>It reads like a sermon, buddy, but fuck it, at least it feels like I know what you're talking about. But on the whole, I think you need to remove a lot of the superfluous parts of the dialogue, like the bit about saying goodbye to your urologist, and false eroticism and sexual disfunction, and banking. This kinda stuff is good: ‘I don’t know. Forget about the whole thing for a while. Get drunk. Work lots of overtime. Who cares?’<BR/><BR/>Alright, fuck this pointless shit and fuck you all. I'm going to write up a lesson on the perceptions of Sidney and Beatrice Webb and G.Bernard Shaw and fucking Stefan Zweig and Henri Barbusse and what they think about Soviet penal systems and Stalin and re-education and rehabilitation. That's what's fucking important in this life.jikajikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356454277883869001noreply@blogger.com